Reduce, Reuse, Recycle

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when it was our last day camping out in the bush my friends and i discovered that there was a bush that was really rare because there wasn’t that much bushes around because it was actually a huge forest it looked so amazing it had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside it looked just like a stinky old bush

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When it was our last day camping out in the bush. My friends and I discovered that has a bush that was really rare. Because there wasn’t that much bushes around because it was actually a huge forests that looks so amazing. It had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside also it looked just like a stinky old bush.

Verbs

Walt: Use different language tools like adjectives, nouns and verbs in our writing

Write Your Poems

Word Problems

This year team 4 has been learning how to solve maths problems. If you want to know more about solving problems please check out my blog.

Changes

Adrienne's 2016 changes movie from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Scientific Question

Homonyms

Walt: Use different language tools like adjectives, nouns and verbs in our writing

Identify the difference in homonyms according to the spelling and meanings

I have been learning about meanings of different words. 

Year 6 Camp Writing

On Tuesday morning some year sixes from Point England school went to camp. We went from the bus to the ferry. On bus it was so quiet that I couldn’t hear hardly anything., Once we got on the ferry it was fun because me Aneelis, Glennes, and Latu got to go to the back of the boat and watch the water go sideways once. When we got to Kawau Island we went to put all our things in and then have some fun we done heaps of sports like bush baseball, crickets, volley, and all sorts.

On the second day we started our activities. All our wet activities started on the third day but all our dry activities were on the second day. Our dry activities were fun because when we were on the Burma trail. I kept on slipping over. I kept on yelling out Fetuao’s name but then I got to the then end. Next it was Fetuao’s turn to be blind folded but then when we started walking Jonathan and Paige were still at the back with Miss Timmy and they were really slow.

After that it was finished we went back to the deck to have morning tea. Morning tea was yum because I ate bread cheese, carrot, with it was delicious that it made me full. After that we had to move on to our next activities which was abseiling. Abseiling was kind of scary because it was too high. Sabrina spewed up and it was really gross.

Then we went bivouac building. It was really fun because we had to build huts out of sticks and “put something waterproof on the top.” I knew that Sabrina's group would win because they had more waterproof stuff on the top and also they had the best hutt.

On the last day it was fun because we cleaned our bunks and we were also playing music outside with Kaden’s mum and some people were dancing. It was also funny because me, Miztique, Nyree, Kerstein, Anna, Bryana, and some other girls sang a song to Mr Sommerville

Until then the fairy arrived and then everybody jumped in and waited for some more things to arrive in the fairy.   

Walt: Write a detailed recount about our experience to Kawau Island

Solving Word Problem

Walt: solve word problems using part whole strategies

Try using more than one strategy to solve number problems

Report criteria

We have been learning about the olympics.

What's the matter

I have been learning about gas solid and liquid

Camping, lost, forest

Once upon a time there were two boys and a girl going camping for halloween their names were Kaydis, Jermaine, and Skye they all went with their mum.  

When they got back to my camping spot and when we got there she  to go an get some food for dinner. They went to go an get some food and when she got back she “ said this is just for me sorry. They had to go and look for their own food to eat. They were too tired to go an get some food.

They were all feeling really Angry, Hungry and Tired. The reason why we were getting Angry, Hungry and Tired it’s because we were lost. They all had the same idea. Their idea was to put sticks on the ground and brake of a branch from a tree. That is how we know that we’ve been there. Because there were heaps of paths we needed to take. There were 5 paths we needed to take.

Walt: narrate a story about a character getting lost in the forest while camping

e-AsTTle Writing Test - October

One Sunny morning Emily and Nathanael went for a walk down to the bush suddenly they heard a really scary sound so then Emily called out “Ho….ho….ho…. Ho is there?” So then they kept on walking. Until they saw someone zoom right across them. So then Nathaniel stepped right up and said “Come out and show yourself”.

But then no one answered and no one showed up. So then they kept on walking. They kept on walking. Until then nathaniel had a really really great plan he said emily with excitement “we should do a trap”.

Emily said “it is completely a waste of time!” Nathanael said “well I have no other plans that is the only one I could think of”.

Emily said with anger “did I ask for any plans!”. Nathaniel said “no” and then he said again “we should do it” wait “can we”. And Emily said but you don’t know what is our trap right? Along came my friends Skye, Nyree, and Penny. Penny said “what are you two doing in the bushes?”.

Emily said to Penny “We didn’t want to go for a walk around our street so then we just came here in the bushes for”. And then Emily said again when we got here we heard something creepy and also saw something creepy run past us so then Nathanael said to me that he was going home to get the rope and the net.

Nyree said “So then what are you guys doing now?” Emily yelled I said setting up a trap so then instead penny yelled out come on guys we are all going to run out in 3…. 2….1 run right now.

                                  To Be Continued   

The Water Cycle

Solving word problem

Walt: solve word problems using part whole strategies Try using more than one strategy to solve number problems

Today me and my group exponents have learnt different strategies. Like tidy numbers solving reversibility place values and also problem solving.  

States of Water & how it changes

Ch..ch..ch..ch..changes...with dry ice!

On Tuesday we had a little bit of fun with our team four teachers it was fun because we exploded diet coke and we also done science of how does liquid turn into solid and them melt and also we also done bouncy balls with miss lavakula and mrs moala.

Making a bouncy ball

Holiday Highlight and Immersion Assembly

Saturday

During the holidays it was fun because we went to our pastors house to do white sunday practices before we done practices. We had breakfast first and wait for our other parents to come with their children to practices some of them came late so then we had to start my sister and my two other cousins had to hold up the flags.

We had to stand in a line starting from smallest to tallest but that dance was for white sunday.

                                                                   Sunday

After we had practices my two sisters and my two brothers and me stayed there for a little while and drank cocoa and ate dinner and we watched raw with our Tuvalu friend. But then my uncle and aunt said that we had to leave because it was getting late for me my brothers and sisters. The next day my aunt and uncle picked me my sister taunese and my big brother kitiona it wasn’t fun because first I was squished second I was hungry and third it wasn’t comfortable. But then when we got to church I was amazed because I children from my church wearing white. But I got more excited because my other aunt and uncle also other cousins Came to our church to watch our dance. But then they had to leave early because they had some other things to do.

                                                            Conclusion

After white Sunday me and my cousins ate heaps of lollies. But then 1 minute later we had to go to our pastors house with my aunt that lives in panmure it was so fun that we played outside we had dinner we played with balloons and drank cocoa there it was the funnest day of my life.

   

                                       Immersion Assembly

At immersion assembly it was fun because we ate and cooked pancakes and we also got to watch movies  that teachers made before school holidays. My favorite movies was teams 4 and 5. I liked the team 4 movie because it was funny and it has more interesting stuff in it like about eating too much lollies and could red bull give you wings. I knew that red bull could not give you wings because red bull ain't a fizzy drink that actually give you wings and I also knew that lollies weren’t good for kids because it is not healthy for them. I like team 5 movie because you get to know more about gas, liquid, and also solid. I really like team 2 movie because we get to check out to see which one can float and which one can sink.  

Coke bottle Expereints

Reading Maps

Hi my name is Adrienne and I go to pt  school in Auckland , nz I am a year 6 student in room 8 maths class this presentation is about finding where things are like fire stations, police stations, and much more.

Doping in sports

Doping in sports

Hi my name is Adrienne and this is my Doping in sports presentation to tell you what happens when you do doping here a some idea for you to tell what they do during this years Olympics if you want some more ideas about doping in sports then check out on my blog.

Geometry

Marble Marvle

Fractions

We have been learning about our fractions like our 2/3, 3/4, and 3/5 if you want to know more about fractions then check out my blog. if you like it then please leave a comment on my blog.

Free Writing

Hi my name is Adrienne and I go to a beautiful school called pt england primary school I have four brothers and two sisters. At my school I have three beautiful teachers and their names are mr Sommerville, miss West, miss Lavakula, and mrs Moala they are the best teachers I have ever had Free Writingin team 4.

Once upon a time their was a rugby player called beauden barrett he was really fast that he scored heaps of tries and scored heaps of goal he is a really cool player that is my favourite player from the all blacks.

If you want to know more beauden barrett then check out on my blog.

Gymnastics in the Olympics

Adrienne Olympics from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Olympic Narative

One sunny morning Usain Bolt thought of something fun to do so then he decided to travel to Brazil in Rio but he wasn’t really sure of which bus to go in so then he left into the wrong bus and left to the wrong place. He was trying to figure out where is he going.

All of a sudden he started panicking because he did not know where he was. So then he bought out his phone and looked how many percent it was but when he looked at his phone it was only 10% full so then he quickly rang somebody for help but then it was to late his phone died so then he got some sticks and made a fire to keep him nice and warm.

The next day he woke up and he was somewhere else. But then he asked the lady “Where am I?" And she said “This is where we take care of people” But then luckily she had a mobile phone. I asked her “may I please use your phone please”? And she said yes you may. So then I quickly grabbed her phone and called my wife. I asked really fast “Come and pick me up!”

And she said “Where are you?” replied his wife and he said “Somewhere around Brazil”,  “Ok”.

I am coming right now. But then one minute later she found me so then we travelled safely back and lived happily ever after.

 

Advice coloumn for stan

Doping in sports

MEREANA and Adrienne doping in sport from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

This video is about should dopping be aloud in this years olympics if you choose no then check out on our blog and tell us why.

Should doping be allowed in the Olympics?

Walt: Understand the affects of performance enhancement drugs in athletes

Explain why athletes who use PEDs are cheats and what the outcomes are

Hi my name is Adrienne and this is my school about should doping be allowed in the Olympics if you want to know about doping then check out on my blog.

Hiwi The Kiwi Narative

In the holidays I went fishing with my grandpa we used my dad's boats to out fishing my grandpa said to me “don’t forget to put on your life jacket on before we go”. So then I quickly put on my life jacket and then left.

All of a sudden we caught a fish. When I looked at it I said to my grandpa you have to pick it up with a wet towel because when you put it back or it will get sick and die.

After we caught the big fish my grandpa said to me “you are a very good at catching fish once you grow up you might pick you to go into the fishing program”. I asked grandpa “when did you start going fishing”? And my grandpa said to me that he started going fishing when he was my age. Then my grandpa said to me “come on let go now” so then we left with the fish to go home.

Fractions

Hi my name is Adrienne and this is my presentation about fraction if you want to know more about 

Fraction

Walt: Solve fraction problems where the numerator is greater than one

Matching Flags with Countries

Boost

Walt: Find and use relevant parts of text to accurately answer questions

Infer and interpret hidden messagesBoo

Mighty Muscles

Walt: Find and use relevant parts of text to accurately answer questions Find proof in the text List different muscles

Olympic Sports in rio

Do you know anything about hurdles?

In hurdles, an athlete runs as fast as they can and jump over obstacles. Hurdles are what female and male can do. They have to run as fast as they could without busting down any of the hurdles.

Hurdles is part of athletics. There are different kinds of hurdles there are 100m, 110m, and 400m hurdles those are the different types of hurdles.

Hurdles is what different kinds of people can do but they can do any kinds of other sports like handball, 100m sprint or any kinds of sports but if they got picked for hurdles then they will have to do it until it ends.

Hurdles is a good sport it helps you jump high and it also helps you run really fast.

Fractions

Walt: Solve fraction problems where the numerator is greater than one

Boostings

Walt: Find and use relevant parts of text to accurately answer questions Infer and interpret hidden messages

Rugby sevens

This presentation is all about the mens rugby sevens new zealand team and if you want to learn more about the nz team check out my blog.

Fractions

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Walt: Find fractions of sets and shapes

Solve fraction problems using knowledge of multiplication and division facts

Dictagloss

Country's that host the Olympics must show that they have the capacity to hold the game and invest their own money into them. through the influx of tourist. the hosting country hoped to gain more money during the Olympics ultimately the ioc got to chose witch country get to host them.

in 2012 the Olympics were held in London, united kingdom it was the third time London had hoisted games. The Olympics were held the olympics were held again in 1908 and 1948. One of the upset were held in shot put Valerie Adams claimed the gold medal.        

Never give up

Walt: Find and use relevant parts of the text to help accurately answer questions Understand the authors point of view

Profile edit

Walt: Create a character profile of an athlete in the New Zealand Olympic Team Hi my name is Adrienne and this my profile edit my favourite rugby player is sonny bill williams because he plays fror my favourite rugby team all balcks if you want know more about sonny bill williams check on https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sonny_Bill_Williams

Olympic history

Do you know anything about the ancient olympic games? It all began in 776 BC in Olympia, Greece.  There was only one event that was the 200 yard dash. Only men could compete in the nude. The games were a religious festival, held every four years to honour the god Zeus.

Alphabet Key

Pizzas

Walt: Find fractions of sets and shapes

Find fractions of numbers using multiplication and division facts

Becoming a kiwi

Walt: Find and use relevant parts of the text to accurately answer questions Understand the author's point of view

Holiday Highlight

In the holidays I went with my mum, dad and my brothers and sisters to my aunt's house  and when we went there we ate chocolate ice block, vanilla ice cream then after that we went to buy the baby some new cloths.

then the next day we went to the pools with my family and it was so cool because we were splashing inside the pool and my cousin came to me and tried to drown me then I swam away from him and then my uncle threw me up and then I came back down then I drowned.

then the last week of the holidays we went for a ride to the city and then when it was night time we all went back home the same time and when we got home I went to sleep until the next day we went to the airport because my brother was going to australia. the end.

Question And Answers

1. Why was Lauren’s dad badgering her about not coming first? Because the the girls that she raced with was a lot smaller than her.
2. What does Lauren’s dad mean by her not taking anything seriously? She was not listening to what her dad was saying to her she ignored him.
3. List three ideas of what Lauren’s advantage is over other girls her age
4. Why did Lauren decide to go for a run at the end? Because she wanted to get better then the girls that she was versing before
5. What do you think was the author’s message is, in this story? Never give up being a champion.

6. WALT: use relevant parts of the text to help answer questions accurately Understand the author’s point of view

Dictagloss term, 3 2016

The 2008 Olympics were held in Beijing china it was the first time that woman's could compete in boxing. Woman from Brunei, Qatar Saudi Arabia were allowed to participate. this was conceited a big deal because the woman's in these country were not equal with the men. The games in china was one of the expensive Olympics in history.

Becoming a kiwi

Walt: Find and use relevant parts of the text to accurately answer questions Understand the author's point of view I've learnt that if you want to be a kiwi you would always have to obey the law and be a responsible kiwi.

Fraction Facts

Walt: Find fractions of sets and shapes

Find fractions of numbers using multiplication and division facts

My real life hero

DO YOU THINK YOU CAN REMEMBER ALL THESE HEROS?

A hero is a person who protects and defends other’s.Heroes can also save people from being in danger or when they need help. Firefighters, nurses, ambulances and police officers are all examples

WHO IS YOUR REAL LIFE HERO AT HOME?

My real life hero is my mum because when there is something that is going wrong with me my mum will always be there for me.

I love my dad because he goes to work to get money and provides us food and other stuffs that we want. He also goes and pays the bills for our house.

WHAT IS A REAL HERO?

A real superhero is a person that saves people from being in danger or animals that are on very high places like kittens or cats. A real life hero is someone who protects little kids and their whanau by giving them what they want and also doing what they want.