when it was our last day camping out in the bush my friends and i discovered that there was a bush that was really rare because there wasn’t that much bushes around because it was actually a huge forest it looked so amazing it had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside it looked just like a stinky old bush
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When it was our last day camping out in the bush. My friends and I discovered that has a bush that was really rare. Because there wasn’t that much bushes around because it was actually a huge forests that looks so amazing. It had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside also it looked just like a stinky old bush.
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Kia ora Adrienne!
ReplyDeleteWow! I really like this! I write stories as a hobby and it is so nice to see students actually editing their work! It is SUCH an important skill for writing. Great work!
Hello! You don't know me yet, but I am Mark - a teacher working for the Summer Leaning Journey these holidays. I hope you're having a great break from school, but as a teacher I can tell you it's very important that we keep on learning during the holidays (and it's even better if it's fun learning).
If you feel like you're up for it then please join in on our programme, the Summer Learning Journey is all about travel and learning about other cultures. There are heaps of different kinds of activities too.
Kia kaha! Have a great break and a happy New Year!
Mark