Monday, 29 February 2016

Problem solving

Walt: Count on and back in tens

Olly's new bike.

WALT: Identify the author’s message in the story

Answer the following questions:

1. List 3 the things that were wrong with Olly’s bike

2. What did Olly have to do in return for Mohammed fixing his bike? teach his korfa how to speak english.

3. Explain one idea why couldn’t Korfa make any new friends? because he couldn’t speak proper english.

4. What did you learn from this story? olly was angry cause his mum couldn’t buy him a new bike.

5. What was the author’s message in the story? if be kind to others they will be kind to you.

February e-AsTTle Writing Test - 2016

once upon a time there was a little girl who disappeared into the forest she was trying to find the way out but she could not she yelled out Help! Help! but still no one could not find her or hear her so then she sat next to the tree and had a little rest and then soon after that she got back up and she tried finding the way out and “she called out Help! Help! Help!”. Soon she heard her brothers and her sisters and her and dad calling out her name.

and then she “said mum, dad”? is that yous”? of course it is but then. When she went to hug her mum dad they just disappeared into space where all the aliens belong and then her dad said to her mum. “What can we do”?
“her mum called I don’t know”? but then the dad called back to her mum “but is there any other way we can get out of space”? the mum “said back I don't think so.

But then the dad called hey I’ve got a way we should crack the window and jump out but their hole disappeared from bad places and then they lived happily ever after   


WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word

 Missing family

something strange was happening one by one things were disappearing first my mum then my dad and now my sister. Were all gone  then it was my job to Investigate and disappearance and to find the solution.

My score out of 10 is: 4

Thursday, 25 February 2016

Narrative Practice: Cat at the Beach

WALT: I can write down the sounds in words I hear and I can punctuate my writing
It was a beautiful sunny day to spend at the beach. Johnson the cat was relaxing on the hot white sand. His master was paddling in the refreshing crystal water, when suddenly his friend Byron came along. He was looking very sorry for himself.

Start your writing here:
The next day Johnson the cat went for a swim down at the beach. Suddenly he saw Byron with a sad face and then Johnson called out “why the long face”? and then Byron sadly “said because kids from my soccer team was being mean to me.

When Johnson the cat finished swimming he dried himself up and went and gave Byron a big hug and said to him “it is ok we can come to the beach  someday and play fun games” instead of playing soccer  

Monday, 22 February 2016

T1 Dictagloss Week 4

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word 
max could see from a distance a family that were at each other's throats. the father yelling “ how could you forget the food to which the mother replied “it was an honest mistake, I chewer someone will help us.

Thursday, 18 February 2016

narative practice: camping

Start your writing here:
Once upon a time there was a boy named  Joseph he went on a camp with his family and his two friends. Their names were Jeremiah and Andrew. They travelled a long way deep in the forest and they stopped and had a little rest.

Suddenly they heard a bang behind their car. Joseph went to check. It was a stranger standing at the back of the car and banging on the door. Joseph’s dad put up his chair and drove as fast as he could down to the camping site.

As soon as they got there they got surrounded by a lake and mosquitoes but then joseph and his family made their tents next to the river. Joseph’s family lived happily ever after.

Friday, 12 February 2016

Adrienne's calculator algerbra

Buzzy Bees

WALT: Find out more information and share three facts about Buzzy Bee in New Zealand What is a Buzzy Bee in New Zealand? a pull along toy In what year does research say it was first made? 1930s What was the name of the man that first made a Buzzy Bee? maurice scheslingers In which city of New Zealand, did he make it?newton, auckland What was the name of his company?Playcraft Products

Thursday, 11 February 2016

Wednesday, 10 February 2016

all about me 2016

Walt:share some information about ourselves

The three little pigs

Walt:Describe characters from the Three Little Pigs.
Here a some words that describe these characters.

Friday, 5 February 2016

Algebra patterns

today we have been learning algebra pattern on algebra you get to learn about shapes, colour and numbers check my work here.