Tuesday, 5 April 2016

Edit Paragragh

Once upon a time there was a dragon named Mack and he was flying around the sky. Then he saw three little kids playing on the park then he float down on the park. And asked them, “what is your guy’s names”? The kids said there names.The oldest said his name first he said that his name was Mack the second oldest said his name was Jeremiah and the youngest said that his name was Andrew. And then the dragon said see you guys later and the kids said wait, “what is your name”? Then the dragon shouted back Mack and the kids said bye Mack and Mack said back bye Jack bye Jeremiah bye Andrew see you Mack then the next day Mack lived happily ever after.

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