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Thursday, 26 May 2016
personification dictagloss
The moon danced upon the ocean is if on a spotlighted stage the tired old shoes felt lonesome at the back of the closet the cellphone alarm screamed and horrid at me until I finely rolled out of bed
Great listening Adrian. You tried really hard with your spelling. Remember to put capital letters and fullstops in the right places.
ReplyDeleteGreat job adrienne nice work
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